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Post by Spectrum on Dec 26, 2008 16:37:27 GMT -5
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Post by Agii Okwes on Dec 27, 2008 0:50:27 GMT -5
i really like the first one of ranvir. it's so epic. the pose is... is... amazing.
AMAZING.
but yeah. one critique for that; d'you see his hind leg that isn't fully shown? his left hind leg, from the viewer's point of view. it's a bit thick, and you should put the other line to show that it's definitely a leg. it took me a second to figure out that it was the heel of the other leg.
okay, i lied. another small critique; ranvir is adorable, but his whiskers bug me a bit. they make him look slightly like a rabbit. i suggest having a limited amount of whiskers, and making them much shorter. or, if you'd like, not showing them at all.
but yes.
i want all of your pictures' babies.
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Post by melantha on Dec 27, 2008 10:58:01 GMT -5
I second that. Your artwork is kickass and I envy you for it -- but in a healthy way. haha. I appreciate the flowy-ness your artwork takes when it's on the paper. It doesn't seem like it's a lifeless picture. It's got movement, and I think you should practice that style when it comes to battles. (same with extremely-angled-perspectives xD) Since Agii criticed on the first image, let me critic the second one. The only thing that's bothering me is how the dog on the left of the page is snarling. Here's the anatomy of a dog's face, it shows both the skeletal and the muscular parts of it: i109.photobucket.com/albums/n58/spoover/doganatomy.pngLook at the muscle which is drawn in from the muzzle towards the eye, I circled it. Notice that the muscle does not run straight across its face -- instead, it seems to draw up towards the center of the "forehead" as I call it. It does not create ripples across the maw, rather, it literally lifts the snout upwards a bit. So, when a dog snarls, you would see something like this[/u] or this[/u] Hope that helps. Keep it up! p.s. We must practice landscapes + trees
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Post by Spectrum on Dec 27, 2008 11:16:59 GMT -5
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